ShadowHunter wrote:it needs a better plot, it mostly looks like random
I'm sorry it seems unclear to you. I will try to remedy it when I remake the current 44 strips (If I decide to do so).
ShadowHunter wrote:it needs a better plot, it mostly looks like random
5. I'm using primarily MSpaint to make this, and I have time constraints (I have to juggle working on this around with other projects (like Fraxy) and daily life things.), so please don't comment on the speech bubble quality.
DrThunderous wrote:...doesn't MSpaint have a speech bubble tool? The later versions of paint should include that.
mmxpert wrote:this suffers from randumb-uncreative syndrome. (not mocking you, check what the words mean)
-starts with touhou characters with exactly 0 innovation,as if they are defined by their past actions/history,
-suddenly random universe. predictable plot and horrible soldier parody. Random universe jumps will ruin the comic completely if you stick around too much, breeze through, or attempt to make any relationships between characters, i suggest you do 2 or 3 more jumps and change the subject. Also DAT. UPPERCUT.
-On a personal note, Joe is suddenly a jerk, he was not a jerk originally...i liked the guy. sheesh.
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