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The Legend of the Rune Wars

Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2012 2:07 am
by Dicearm
For class, we had to do something creative to share with the class. That's all we were told, what we could do was up to us.

So I wrote this. It's an overview of the prequel to the history of magic, in a world which I have fully fleshed out in my head {Or so I like to think} but have been too lazy to put on paper/type out until here.

It's rather short {Re: 572 words} due to my having to read it to the entire class, but I still think it came out somewhat decently.

Who knows, maybe one day I'll write the whole thing. But for now...Enjoy either the story, or laughing at how terrible it is I guess.


Re: The Legend of the Rune Wars

Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2012 3:35 pm
by Dabir
You didn't mention a wold before. If there's a wold around I think we should know. Those can be dangerous.

Re: The Legend of the Rune Wars

Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2012 3:37 pm
by [][][][]
Give him a break. I see this as merely chapter 1 of the history of wherever this happened.
Though I agree that it's a bit short and lacking in serious details beyond the summary, still.
(But then again, I guess you don't give anyone a break.)
In typography, however... there's a few missteps.
It's =/= Its. Former is a shorthand for 'it is', whereas the latter is a possessive.
Minor misspellings, most obvious being world -> wold in the last paragraph.

Dah, fudge. Dabir ninja'd.

Re: The Legend of the Rune Wars

Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2012 3:45 pm
by AlexMdle
That's a short chapter, bro.

Reads like a wiki entry.

Re: The Legend of the Rune Wars

Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2012 7:20 pm
by Dicearm
Dicearm wrote:It's an overview of the prequel to the history of magi
Not even a chapter, more like the summary you would find on the back of a book or inside cover. Only a bit longer.

And yes, typos. I am aware of those, but...eh. I'm just too lazy to bother fixing them. Oh well s(^.^)b

Re: The Legend of the Rune Wars

Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2012 7:52 am
by [][][][]
Right. My bad. ^_^;