Dabir wrote:Actually I think SS did misspell practice. 'Practice' is doing something over and over again to get better at it, 'practise' is doing something with dedication, like being a practising Jew or a practising doctor, who does practice but also has a practise.
God damn it.
Armored Entity wrote:Also I do understand you aren't into Madoka Magika, but I guess you like the idea behind this fan-series, am I right?
Armored Entity wrote:Also what exactly do you mean by "concepts and lore?"
Armored Entity wrote:Also I did talk about it with Alexmdle. I was surprised, but he actually doesn't like the idea of this.
Armored Entity wrote:Oh, didn't know that's how it is spelled in British.
Armored Entity wrote:I talked with some other people on some other sites, and many of them think this is going to be great when its done.
Armored Entity wrote:. So Jo thinks that it is now her duty to destroy the Witches so that she can finally put them out of their misery. I figured this will make Jo have more reason behind her efforts, and it also is rather dark, as for euthanasia isn't a very happy subject.
Armored Entity wrote:This is another idea I had for something cute that Jo will do... -snip- Jo will remove her head and allow someone she really trusts to carry it around... -snip- she'll even let them pop it off by themselves... -snip- she does this usually to allow them to cuddle her or play around with her... -snip- Jo then tells Rika "You've been carrying me around for almost an hour now, you know you'll have to stick me back on sooner or later." Then Rika replies to her, "I know, but you're just so darn cute!" and then Rika pets her, which Jo enjoys. Someone else suggested this, and I figured it would be cute.
Armored Entity wrote:I had some ideas for funny puns and jokes that they will make at certain parts of this Manga... -snips- I know the puns don't make it automatically good, but it sort of spices things up if you know what I mean.
Armored Entity wrote:Here's a few example of the jokes I had in mind.
Armored Entity wrote:I personally thought these were rather witty, and sort of humorous too, though not that much.
Armored Entity wrote:. Kyouko then makes a joke here and says "I always loved that move of yours Jo, you really are, using your head, there!" Then Jo responds by saying "More like losing, and using my head, hehehe."
Armored Entity wrote:Another pun was going to be when Jo is showing off more of her body disassembly trick to Rika. In this one, Jo detaches her hand at the wrist, then makes it crawl on top of Rika and pets her with it. Rika notices and tell her "Wow, I can see how this special ability often times comes in, hand-y, for you Jo!"
Armored Entity wrote:And another pun, not having to do with Jo in this one, will be at the part where they are engaged in battle with Kolour, the Puppet Witch. During the fight, Homura tells Rika "Okay, I've got a plan to really do some damage to Kolour." Rika then asks, "really, what is your plan then?" Following that, Homura spawns
Armored Entity wrote:a bunch of C4 charges with her abilities, which they are going to use on Kolour, and tells Rika, "well why don't you, C4, Yourself!" (Get it, because C4 sounds like, "See for" and such).
Armored Entity wrote:I plan to incorporate these changes into it, as for they actually would work very good in it.
ShadowSpectre wrote:Are you fucking kidding me? You're going to have Jo, who has no reason whatsoever to believe that the witches are unhappy with what they have, think what she's doing is mercy killing? Find better motives.
ShadowSpectre wrote:NO. THIS IS NOT CUTE. THIS IS WEIRD. THIS IS FUCKING STUPID. CASUAL DISMEMBERMENT IS NOT. FUCKING. CUTE.
ShadowSpectre wrote:No, we don't know. You don't talk about "spicing it up". You're being a goddamn moron. THIS IS NOT HOW YOU DO HUMOUR.
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